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You've heard the story before
The one time brought to an end
Where strong feelings faded
and two fools just stayed friends

Are the feelings truly gone?
Can I really walk away?
Am I looking for a reason?
Will it be worth it to stay?

Distance brought us closer
Chatting for hours into the night
Talking openly about everything
Always the last to say goodnight

But there is someone else
waiting for me to look his way
Is it fair to continue
keeping him at arms' length?

He shows his affection
In the boldest way he dares
We have very little in common
But it's impossible to forget he cares

One day I'll have to choose
Between good friend and something more
I'm not equipped to handle this
Untill then I remain simply torn
©2007-2009 ~silverquill-87
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The story of my life...again. The threat of complication is almost enough to make me join a convent. Almost. *sighs* Life was easier when boys had cooties.

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Kom samen met mij,
We zullen het verleden achterlaten,
Kom samen met mij,
En we zullen zien wat er gebeurd.
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:wtf:What? What'd you think of it? It's the first poem I've written in a long time, I'd appreciate some real feedback.

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Amor Vincit Omnia
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I thought it was good! Sorry that you're actually going through this though.... :( That's not fun. But I liked the poem! Very nice! :clap:

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If you expect the unexpected, doesn't that make the unexpected, the expected?

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:iconsilverquill-87:
It's the first one in awhile, I'm pretty happy with how it turned out

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Amor Vincit Omnia
:iconcatnipkitty:
Well, you should be happy with the way it turned out! It's a good poem! :D Don't worry though, everyone has periods of time when they aren't very productive. I had one of those not too long ago. But now, I've got more inspiration.....or maybe it's just because I'm bored a lot..... :XD:

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If you expect the unexpected, doesn't that make the unexpected, the expected?

There are only a few perfect people in the world. All the rest are right handed!

Go meet some cool cats who write! --> [link]

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